Burden Comments

'I always felt like an extra wheel'. This is despair and self-loathing. You are more than what people make you believe. You are a champion and winner. Good poem though.

I too admire the excellent comment of Richard. Brilliantly presented.

To be a trouble less one is the real ascetic life which is godly, decent and manly

Not at all, God is great, HE is with all of us.

I join my hand to lend you my shoulder but chain your dog for me. Good poem. Just kidding for dogs.

PS: We are family of PH we are here to make you as our Guest not as a burden.

Optimism nicely revealed in poem.

I wonder if earth starts to complain the same where will we go? Imagine Earth says 'You all are burden on me, get away'.

We all are here on earth with a purpose and we serve greater purpose, the pain you feel of being a burden on other is nothing but the patience test for those around you and for you it is good for writing some heartfelt Poetry.5****.

2) And you know that I mean that without diminishing your sense of pain! I will always be there for you, my poet friend! !

LeeAnn, your poem is indeed brilliant! You've managed to convey facetiousness and sarcasm in the same poem. THAT is a stroke of GENIUS! Love it, my friend!

No worries. I check in on you Monday! Great poem. I'm at that age too.

Your poem is really heartbreaking, one should be a burden LeeAnn, whatever their age, but unfortunately in the 21st century, many are due to many other influences and situations. Stay +ive.

Top marks LeeAnn ***** My feelings exactly x

I'll get over it eventually..... significant.

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