Burden Comments

Expressive and so impressive! Really enjoyed reading it more than one time. It is challenging from the inside.

This is so poignant, brilliant. Each of us are given moments of happiness. Times when we are the sunshine to help the grains grow. When we are light to others dark. These times are fleeting in there passing, only there to remind us of our place, to show us joy so we suffer more The poem in its entirety speaks with deep meaning to me. Thank you for sharing.

Beautiful write, the ending is perfect!