Wednesday, February 1, 2012

Burden Comments

Rating: 4.5

Bearing the burden of her greasy teen
She walks nearer to the lovely shore
Her mind weaving a satin nest of fantasy
Uncertain and lost she gazes at shells, sand and its shinny core
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Krunal Pandya
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Ravi Patel 14 February 2021

hardik pandya height in feet

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Krunal Pandya 02 February 2012

Thanks a lot Kavin for encouraging words of appreciation.

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Sankaran Ayya 02 February 2012

Her mind weaving a satin nest of fantasy.....nice line a good poem about teen age blues and fantasy KRUNAL -KAVIN CHARALAN

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