Monday, May 4, 2009

Burden Comments

Rating: 5.0

I know I'm a burden
to those who love me most.
I know I've become someone
resembling a ghost.
...
Read full text

Melanie Walendowsky Baker
COMMENTS
Barry A. Lanier 16 May 2009

an evocative cartharsis but also reminding me that in love there are no burdens, , and pain shared dimishes.....

0 0 Reply
Melissa Thompson 14 May 2009

LOVE IT, LOVE IT, LOVE IT...10/10

1 0 Reply
John Smith 07 May 2009

Ten Ten Ten Ten! ! : D

1 0 Reply
Ency Bearis 04 May 2009

a great introspective write..well expressed...nice...10

1 0 Reply
Close
Error Success