Burden Comments

It's hard to bear another's cross, especially when we have our own to bear. I could feel the solidarity, the willingness to let go of you to have two. - But it's a double-edged sword, isn't it. Was it really a mistake? Or perhaps a lesson learned. Some just don't have it to give, which is certainly not your case. Powerful, Cory, and very painful. Great write, though! :)

very good rhymes but if you could rewrite it with like words that mean the same thing but like are bigger lol it always helped my poems to come out a little but then again it might just be perfect the way is so ya keep it up

well written poem to dedicated the real love, thanks for sharing,

i enjoyed reading it as well, i also understand it, the mountain on one is the wind on another