Buoyant (With Adoration) Comments
You don't know what you do to me
My world perches on your shoulder
Beams are filtering all I see
Shivers now build to a smolder
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This is another fine rhythm and rhyme poem. There are no weaknesses in this poem. It has a wonderful structure and it is presented the way it should be. The reading is easy and the flow of the words is magical in some cases. Another treasure of a poem. GW62
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9/4/2025 4:40:55 AM # 1.0.0
I truly agree with wollfee sir...a perfect rhyme and rhythm..very expressive.