Friday, October 24, 2014

Buoyant Boy Comments

Rating: 5.0

Beautiful, brave, buoyant boy.
Floating, cutting, slicing through the blue waves.
Strokes made with zest and zeal.
At home in this medium as is a seal.
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Jeannette Heywood
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Khairul Ahsan 27 June 2017

I think, this poem is about a 'buoyant boy' whom you have seen swimming, floating and drifting on blue waters. The words portray a visual imagery. Nice poem, well done!

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