Saturday, April 16, 2016

Bunniies In The My Garden Comments

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This uncertain world that we inhabit
Has the staying power of a rabbit
Who poses perfect in a shade
With nervous sniffing in the glade.
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David McLansky
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Bri Edwards 23 July 2017

bunniies? that is almost funnyy. :) yes, some things are fleeting. but not all! have you fled, died, or just slowed down in submitting poems? ? bri :)

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Rajnish Manga 16 April 2016

Uncertainties could be seen in our lives and relationships. This is beautifully told in the poem. But the wind did stiffen and stirred a breeze, And off you scampered amid the trees

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