Monday, February 1, 2016

Bundles Of Happiness- A Pilgrimage By The Dawn Comments

Rating: 5.0

The dawn brightens with you-longing to walk
In a bundle of happiness, smilingly nods-
Morning arriving to overtake- darkness of ages,
World is asleep-she sets on a pilgrimage, guides!
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Deb Panda
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Hazel Durham 02 April 2016

Beautiful imagery with inspired lines that shines with new light of the dawn! So sorry I'm only getting to read your poem now as I was sick.

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Soumita Sarkar 02 February 2016

Good....its nice to see people loving verse n writing them too.Thanks.

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 02 February 2016

Verily, the dawn, Sun, moon, stars, day and night play a vital role.

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Anil Kumar Panda 01 February 2016

The soothing feel one gets during dawn and the days smooth sailing into night is beautifully penned. Liked it.

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