Thursday, November 19, 2009

Bumpy Road Comments

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Driving down
This bumpy road
Trying to avoid
All these obstacles
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Allison Unknown
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Iron Panda 23™ 07 April 2010

what evry1 else said (:

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Yose Alba 13 December 2009

Wonderful context, and I love how your poems all flow effortlessly.

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Sherbanu Molu 25 November 2009

this life of yours, is well DESCRIBED, LOV IT.

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This poem is really easy to read, it's just flows smoothly. I really get what you're saying about life, and crashing into a brick wall. I hope that life isn't always just a brick wall to you.

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