Sunday, October 23, 2005

Bumming Pipe Comments

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Around the courthouse
Before the heat of day
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Sidi Mahtrow
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Max Reif 23 October 2005

As soon as I realized this story was about men lounging in the park square in front of a small town courthouse, my interest was aroused. It was pretty much sustained through the entire story, though I think you could smooth out the flow a little, here and there.

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