Today I saw a bumblebee.
He was on a pretty rose.
I leaned in to look at him
and he stung me on my nose!
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And one can literally see the child and the bee because you relate so well our memories as a child
This is brilliant CJ had me laughing out loud. I have two stories about Bees from my childhood, one concerning my sister the other my dog. Must realte them to you sometime. Sill laffin'
Such a beautiful poem, wonderfully written. Your talent for children's poetry, never ceases to amaze me. I enjoy reading you so much. Thank you for sharing. Kindest Regards Slim. x.
So sweet and innocent. A 10 from me, C.J. Shannon