Saturday, August 9, 2008
Bumble Bee Comments
Rating: ★4.5
Acquiesce to my insect,
Spread your petals wide,
But beware the stinging object,
At the end of my spine
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Marla Byeuttif
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8/1/2025 4:03:56 PM # 1.0.0
I was going to give this an 8 but I gave it a 9. I did this because the rhythm created a music that was favorable to the ear. The rhymes were not near perfect, but I didn't feel the reader would notice that because of the sound. This is really a rare poem that does this. In a sense, there is a kind of magic that had to be rewarded. GW62