Monday, March 5, 2018

Bully Turned Friend Comments

Rating: 5.0

You were teased and hurt and punched and hit
Until they finally would get over their fit.
You never would even say a word
With the fear that you might not be heard.
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Emily Howard
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Subhas Chandra Chakra 06 March 2018

You never would even say a word With the fear that you might not be heard. Lovely way of looking into such adverse situations, such less reacting minds. Loved the poem so nicely crafted. 10++++++++

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Chinedu Dike 05 March 2018

An insightful piece of poetry embellished in beautiful poetic rhyme. A beautiful creation, well expressed and nicely penned. Thanks for sharing Emily.

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Joshua Adeyemi 05 March 2018

They soon learned how To be kind and say now The things that would make you feel great And to say sorry in the best kind of way Before it was too late. Well penned. Joshua.

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White Tiger 05 March 2018

A descriptive and inspiring write. thank you for sharing Emily. A 10++

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