Thursday, August 31, 2006

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I start to shake,
from my head to my toes
Tears fall from my eyes
and then to my nose,
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Bridgid Patrick
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Brian Dorn 31 August 2006

Bridgid, I like the way the poem developed. Initially spelling out victim but then shifting to a state of vengeance. Great buildup and powerfully written! ! Brian

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