Friday, May 4, 2018

Bullseye Comments

Rating: 5.0

to me, the truth looks like a bullseye.
a series of rings, each smaller than the next
(it is disproportionate and shifts with the sun)
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Vonnie Postit
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Bernard F. Asuncion 04 May 2018

Dear Vonnie, such a good poem....10++++

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Dr Antony Theodore 04 May 2018

the bullseye center is the sacred or uplifted...it is unchanging. you are a poet when you hear voices in you. it is very often divine voice...... be careful not to mix up with the worldly voices.. a fine poem dear poet. tony

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