Tuesday, June 23, 2015

Bullies Poem Comments

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Bullies, Bullies wake up inside,
what would you do if your victim decided to die?
You don't understand the pain that you cause,
don't you know it can get you in trouble with the law?
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Naomi Louise Short
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Lyn Paul 25 June 2015

Dear Naomi, You are such an inspiration to others and too, at a young age. You show such strength and appear to take what is thrown at you with an amazing guard. These words could be distributed to schools. Possibly you are still a student? You have addressed a disturbing subject beautifully. Thank you for your notes.

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thank you! ! please check out my new poems and let me know what you think! ! Thanks as im a new teen poet and im new to write poems! ! Thanks x

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Fabrizio Frosini 23 June 2015

BRAVA Naomi! è questo il modo migliore di dimostrare a quelle miserabili persone quanto tu vali = this is the best way to demonstrate to those miserable people what you're worth.. Quoting Emily Dickinson: We never know how high we are / Till we are asked to rise.. that is when we are called to overcome something bad (especially) . Thus, be sure: You are a giant! Thanks for sharing and.. keep on writing! greetings from Italy

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