Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Monday, June 8, 2009

Bullet Proof Comments

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You have laid your life in vain,
Worry was not for self main,
But the way it was to be put off,
Only because of jacket bullet proof,
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Fay Slimm 12 January 2010

Clear and detailed proof that war is no answer and never can be.

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Mohammed Hassan 21 October 2009

i like your way and the way you shape your words it's like speaking silent words great work keep it up

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Poetic Soul 16 October 2009

A well penned write, beautifally adreessed to those Incompetent. Your words are truly empowering and supportive.

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Prof. Dr. Sakti Chakravorty 04 October 2009

A strong ETC* to stir slothful conscience of both civilians and leaders. Ten+ Thanks for comment. Cordially invite to my page. ds. * Electro convulsive therapy.

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Lady Grace 01 October 2009

not necessary important the quantity..the quality should be checked first..nice piece..

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Sherri Coulter 21 September 2009

my brain is not warped only tired -maybe bored-but sleep it needs -so close the doors. thank you.

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Sachin Goswami 13 September 2009

You have laid your life in vain, Worry was not for self main, But the way it was to be put off,

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Ken E Hall 10 September 2009

Excellent poem on this subject and makes you scratch your head when life is lost because off superior action without checking equiptment...so sad..the write a voice of action++++10 regards

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Sagarika Shah 07 September 2009

It is all for the material inferior, Obey the orders of superiors, Lay down the life and call the warriors

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Twinkle Vohra 07 September 2009

You have laid your life in vain, Worry was not for self main, But the way it was to be put off,

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Sangita Rao 03 September 2009

You have laid your life in vain, Worry was not for self main, But the way it was to be put off, ........10

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Edwina K 01 September 2009

You have laid your life in vain, Worry was not for self main, But the way it was to be put off, Only because of jacket bullet proof......10

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Sadia Hussain 28 August 2009

You have laid your life in vain, Worry was not for self main, ....10

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 28 August 2009

commision has no omissions...sad

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Venkat Ramanna 16 August 2009

reflection of totally low mentality...10

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K.v. Subbarao 16 August 2009

traded off for the money....10

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Darshna Chopra 13 August 2009

we sell our soul too....10

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Chetna Purohit 13 August 2009

we have stooped so below level...10

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Ratna Patel 12 August 2009

lives are put at risk....10

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Ketan Rajgor 12 August 2009

nothing like bullet proof now....10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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