Wednesday, May 2, 2012

Bullet For My Heart Comments

Rating: 5.0

In with a bullet, out with hearts
Forever in my heart, you will remain
In with a bullet, out with hearts (with hearts)
There's nothing, but bloodstains
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Grant Lovell
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Dr Antony Theodore 20 June 2017

Persuades me that I'm in love, Your words get to me, A smiple touch trumbles me. Your the drug, And I'm in love. inside me burns love and its mysteries both physically and psychologically felt is depicted very well. very nice poem my dear poet. tony

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Kasia Fedyk 23 June 2012

It is truly a fantastic poem Grant, the words that flow through your heart so filled with In love creates the doorway to discovery of this precious love, its power and passion that transforms us in an instant. I love it!

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Oludipe Oyin Samuel 09 June 2012

Whoa! You've penned this well. Amazing concept. I love it

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Samantha Rak 23 May 2012

AMAZING... Gosh there really isn't anything else I can say but well done!

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Romeo Della Valle 17 May 2012

Amazing! A very well penned and poignant write that clearly shows your great potential in the Poetry World! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!

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