In with a bullet, out with hearts
Forever in my heart, you will remain
In with a bullet, out with hearts (with hearts)
There's nothing, but bloodstains
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It is truly a fantastic poem Grant, the words that flow through your heart so filled with In love creates the doorway to discovery of this precious love, its power and passion that transforms us in an instant. I love it!
Whoa! You've penned this well. Amazing concept. I love it
AMAZING... Gosh there really isn't anything else I can say but well done!
Amazing! A very well penned and poignant write that clearly shows your great potential in the Poetry World! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!
Persuades me that I'm in love, Your words get to me, A smiple touch trumbles me. Your the drug, And I'm in love. inside me burns love and its mysteries both physically and psychologically felt is depicted very well. very nice poem my dear poet. tony