Wednesday, September 28, 2011

Bullet Comments

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My tongue is twisted
And dead sick of words.
Still I know he'll get
Exactly what he deserves.
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Stefanie Fontker
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Vipins Puthooran 29 September 2011

Wonderful poem... A strong determination... Power packed poem

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Dave Walker 29 September 2011

really like this one. my partner she spits bullets too. really like this.

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Malaya Roses 28 September 2011

Poetess is displaying a solid stand in each of her poem. The pride and soul of her determination shall break many wall ego! ! ! Excellent poem and I love the perspective about never getting lost without a fight! ! !

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Crimson Love 28 September 2011

hehehehehe Beutiful, my friend ;)

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Ben Burger 28 September 2011

This is an emotional poem depicting a relationship of spite, I've felt something like that. Nice work

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