Friday, September 29, 2017

Bull Roar Comments

Rating: 5.0

The persistence of shook leaves
Clinging so tenaciously to life and limb
Is all the roar of my October thinking now.
I, too, am such a tree as all these giants
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Troy Cochran
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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 October 2017

Clinging so tenaciously to life and limb, the persistence of shook leaves. Like breeze given by trees, mind gives rise to brilliant perception. Standing so forlorn and lordly in our tattered sleeves we observe bull elephant trunks. Re-dreaming a plethora of new theme amazes mind entirely in this imagery. The roar is mocked and brilliance is roared. An amazing poem very powerfully presented during this October in self seasoning with bright reasoning....10

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Troy Cochran 31 October 2017

'The roar is mocked and brilliance is roared.' I like it. I may make that my epitaph! Very interesting comments you've made here. I thank you for them. :)

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Bernard F. Asuncion 29 September 2017

Such a very interesting poem... a huge 10++++++

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Troy Cochran 30 September 2017

Thank you, Bernard, it is much appreciated. :)

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