Charlie was fat and coarse.
He didn’t appreciate women
He never had a woman throw her head back
or stretch out her limbs
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Sir, you lines are real and you drew a very distinct line of differences between Yourself and Bukowski. Nice work, sir. . ...Oladehinde Joseph Ibikunle (Nigeria)
You have captured Bukowski well. I like the way you have linked both subjects
i read his book Post Office after a friend recommended it to me (i worked for u.s. postal service almost as long as Thomas was a 'fireman') . don't think all postal employees are the same! ! ! otherwise i don't 'know' bukowski. - - - - - - - - - - - - Her mouth will taste of wild strawberries ................when you find one whose mouth tastes of wild strawberries AND sweet whipped cream, give me her address, ............please! an interesting 'poem'. thanks for sharing. :) bri. this poem: i especially liked the lines: We will find that place where the sea washes a path for whispering clamshells ....... i think my japanese wife might like to find that place also. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -