Wednesday, January 23, 2008

Building Comments

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A brick to start it all
a wall to shroud it
a few more to surround it
a castle to protect it
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Augustus Carter
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Rhiannon Scase 25 January 2008

Wow! Great use of metaphors and awesome ending! Another brilliant poem! Rhiannon*

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