Sunday, March 16, 2014

Building A Roket Comments

Rating: 5.0

I'm building a rocket.
As soon as I'm done
I'm taking my friends
on a trip to the sun.
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saif ahmed
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Akhtar Jawad 02 April 2014

Good realization of ground realities, pleasing way of presenting a thought, good poem.

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Kevin Quero 21 March 2014

Cool... Nice poem about the rocket

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