Tuesday, December 8, 2015

Building A Fortress In The Sand Comments

Rating: 4.0

The onset of fooling yourself in being overly important
is a source of irrationality instead of insolence.
With a touch of boredom the imagination can run wild
opening new boulevards of thought for an informant.
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Kim Barney 16 December 2015

A daunting task it seems to tackle a poem with so many words, but well worth the time. Thanks for sharing.

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Paul Amrod 03 March 2016

Sorry that I was a bit intellectual about this poem but otherwise these idiots will go on!

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Ratnakar Mandlik 08 December 2015

Dear friend, rectified the omission. Thanks. Ratnakar Mandlik.

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Paul Amrod 10 December 2015

Hi Ratnakar I have been by your wonderful poems and will return again. Greetings, Paul

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Ratnakar Mandlik 08 December 2015

A marvelous soliloquy. Enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Paul Amrod 08 December 2015

Hi Ratnakar, Thank you kindly for your wonderful compliment! Greetings, Paul

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