Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Saturday, September 8, 2012

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You forgot the to color the yellow
to represent the sun shine and glow
with bright paint to show wind's blow
Sign of gentle movement to show
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 January 2013

Nice work Aryan Long37 minutes ago I the picture it built in my mind

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 September 2012

good Aadeesh Shastry6 hours ago nice poem Comment 0 Decent

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 September 2012

Callum Falconer6 hours ago I think that if you edit this poem a little that it could be improved greatly. But i think you got real talent, ye? .....Good!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 September 2012

You forgot the to color yellow For sun shine's glow

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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