You forgot the to color the yellow
to represent the sun shine and glow
with bright paint to show wind's blow
Sign of gentle movement to show
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good Aadeesh Shastry6 hours ago nice poem Comment 0 Decent
Callum Falconer6 hours ago I think that if you edit this poem a little that it could be improved greatly. But i think you got real talent, ye? .....Good!
You forgot the to color yellow For sun shine's glow
Nice work Aryan Long37 minutes ago I the picture it built in my mind