Wednesday, July 11, 2007

Build Me An Ark! Comments

Rating: 5.0

It's pouring on the outside
Rain and thunder too! !
Raindrops keep on falling
There's nothing I can do
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Dee Daffodil
COMMENTS
David Threadgold 11 October 2008

Hi Dee. I like the poem and I like the way it has a sudden end. sorry no wood left for the ark though. Regards Dave T.10/10

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Hello Dee - No ark would be necessary if you would bring out the sunshine again with one of your wonderful smiles! ! ! Best wishes - Cheryl

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stopping by to read your rhyme, I hope all your tears have dried That flood has already come for me .......and I drowned

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Zen Bojczuk 13 July 2007

Don't know if I should be happy or sad... the ark is funny, but your tears are not. I guess you joke through your tears. Sorry no ark... not even the wood. However... I do have a rescue raft.... and I know how to use it. Zen

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Diane Violet 13 July 2007

Have Ark, been tested, it floats...sending it to you! Hugs, Diane

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