Wednesday, June 17, 2009

Bug Naps Comments

Rating: 4.9

Life as love loses color
Bird as time flies away
Memory as old foe—
Wood-mite eats night
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Ashraful Musaddeq
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Ejaz Khan 27 June 2009

Don't let no bugs attack soul, a pleasant read like usual! From your side a beautiful write!

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Shashendra Amalshan 20 June 2009

well..I don't what else to say..except these are all mind blowing! ! ! ! ! ...it s been two months since i came to the site...and you are a very unique writer indeed! ! ! ! 10+++ splendid one as always... regards shan

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true thoughts about the life and the world..well penned..wanted to live for one day in a poet's thought..10++++

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Catrina Heart 18 June 2009

Cruel catfish wakes up Bug naps on the soul ----- fabulous metaphors written...when conscience naps into the soul and the self love awakes...greediness takes over...now there'll be a laughing thunder! ! ! 10+++

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Callie Carroll 17 June 2009

Very interesting ideas, intriguingly stated.

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very well said...bug naps on the soul...memory is souls enemy

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