Tuesday, February 14, 2012

Buds In Winter Comments

Rating: 3.4

A lifeless void to the night yet to come
My heart, a rose
Who's fate is to be picked and die in your palm
But should you ever leave it grow
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Mia Persson
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R.j. Wynn 14 May 2013

Hot stuff, love it, keep writing.

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Hans Vr 18 May 2012

We are all meant to be picked, Mia. Our beauty has to be noticed. Even if a single person enjoys our (inner or outer) beauty our life will have made a difference to this world that may last for an eternity. This poem is a very nice and very poetic expression of this giant truth. ('Little purple flower' on my page expresses something related)

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Sara Fielder 17 February 2012

Somehow blood and roses always seem to fit together metaphorically. Another great poem Mia.

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