You praise my strength,
my fun for the war, ...
the huge wound in
my head yet to heal....
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Is it Budha with one D or Buddha with two? You have it one way in the title and the other way in the poem. I spelled it with two in my Buddha poem. Enjoyed reading it in any case.
A Fantastic write once again from your pen. Sure, Budha will be Laughing by not looking at the poem, but the way you have presented the truth in a beautiful way. Beautiful presentation. Loved reading it. Congrats for well deserved poem of the day!
This tells a horrible story... I think.... Is this Budha that is so callous? I guess my ignorance precludes my understanding of your faith's entirety. But I feel like 'crushing the one eyed Budha' represents crushing a mindset, perhaps a peoples will.... In any event, fantastic poetry friend....
Meaning of laughing is much more than literary. It looks like a knock on the head by a great teacher. Very meaningful.
World's indignation very effectively presented! (10)
An interesting perspective on Budhism. Good write. I will think about it.
interesting piece..i'm a Buddhist myself and it really does have an impact..
enligtening the conscience.....................good work..........
I loved your 'Budha is laughing'. What an effective poetic satire on what man has made of Man. You have put all your wit in it.
Congrats for capturing the home page. I have already commented about this poem.