Buddhist Temple In The Mountains Comments

A stone slab Marks the memory of my friend I cry with the ten thousand things- - - An inexplicable beauty in this poem that holds my breath.

Dear Daniel, I know you were only going for a simple imagery poem but...You went far beyond that! Your poem not only showed me the painting but it told me a story! I must say, that is quite impressive to me because I've never experienced that before, but I suppose the two do go togther, don't they? Painting and poetry? I think so. If anyone dissagrees then they should read your poem! Excellent job! Sincerely, -SOH

A long journey started in spring and ending in winter in search of salvation, your destination being Li Ching's Temple! It is situated at an alarming height with a narrow road winding upwards and losing itself in mist and snow! Yet, nothing can dissuade you from struggling upwards and finally you reach the temple! The description of the 'dark beauty' against the back ground of the wind driven and frost bitten trees is so arresting! Again I see here the course of a pilgrimage spanning across a man's entire life! This poem has a mysterious charm! ! Enjoyed! !

A beautiful word-painting, and adding emotion vibrating trough seasons -makes it delightful.