#(Buddha) 08 Sight Of An Old Man Comments

continuation of the life of BUDDHA..when he saw the old man, he pictured himself, what will be his looks when got old...?

How long his father Could act as a barrier Against his son’s desire To go out everywhere? religious books and tale reveals that what evr barrier we may create, ultimate destiny is already decided and is bound to take place..grat right from renowned write and poet.. i loved it most....10 read mine bidding farewell....humble submission

Ammmmmazing narration......fine diction---> excellent! 10+

Your stanzas flow with poetic music. Buddha's charioteer has become his teacher in the life school. A fine word portrait of the old man. Lovely write, my distant friend. Warm wishes, Sandra

your rhymes are so natural...lovely narration..channa was his childhood friend too

Poem has a strange ending