Bud Comments

oh a wonderful poem..! !

brilliant poem sarvesh...you use your pen to great effect..10

Your maturity of thought belies your age. The opening two lines are striking.

'A bud slowly begins to bloom somewhere.' Beautiful poem. 10 for this moving composition.

an artful piece...good imageries using dawn bud and the poet's budding imagination and his juvenilia...a pity nobody rated this...10

If I had to give this poem a one word description it would have to be eloquent. It was a simple yet wonderfully worded poem. The opening line was the premier of what was to come.

The magic of tenderness, like a poet's forgotten juvenilia. ............. poets.. are born.. ancient..and/ or they remain.. forever young.... true..! ! good work..10+

The mist hangs the air, like some long lost reembrance These lines are super. Keep writing

beautiful.......expressed well......! ! ! thanx

A lovely poem. Enjoyed it. U get 10++

i can almost touch the experience of the emotion behind, sarvesh...ur emtions/wrds r tangible...