Wednesday, September 12, 2018

Bucephalus Of Alexander Comments

Rating: 5.0

Your horse has taken you
so fast and far
like Bucephalus
of
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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 September 2018

Bucephalus of Alexander the Great is taken so far and the horse has taken king so far. Remembering the history once again is wise. An amazing poem is wisely penned.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 12 September 2018

thank u sir I was feeling like a broken glass Once the glass has cracked nothing on earth nor heaven no powers can help patch the broken pieces again So I say to all amen make amends The miracle of life will ascend and broken hearts twill mend..Metaphorical poem

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M Asim Nehal 12 September 2018

With one arrow you killed two birds, This is fantastic poem, a part of the poem reminds us about the past laurels whereas the other part reminds us of those horses who are racing now (precisely in PH) , A fantastic satire..100+++

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 12 September 2018

I have an arrow called WILL more than two birds at a time it kills AND to me returns as per my will And so did Alexander know he had come too far alone He asked Bucephalus what to do the horse neighed and turned about homewards he needed o order but flew much faster and ALEXANDER knew he had a friend in who now hope you also knew in Poet Me...thank u sir

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 12 September 2018

for fiends read friends please typo weak eyes half blind

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M Asim Nehal 12 September 2018

Even Bucephalus will fail to vote for this poem but I did it......10

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