Bubbles Burst Comments

'Before the time is up Look at your stuff Mend your ways Else bubbles will burst.'...yes, how much a retrospection is essential is beautifully expressed...full score

Beautifully expressed with powerful reflections! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..

A beautiful tapestry you weaved with that poetic needle. But keep it away from that hot air balloon, or we will all be grounded!

Splendid poem. I will certainly read it more than once

Very true words. Nicely woven and written. Thank-you. Indeed we need to take care.