Sunday, November 22, 2020

Bubbles Burst Comments

Rating: 4.8

A small pin is enough
To burst any bubble
Life is so beautiful
Like a dream in dream
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Poetic Sky
COMMENTS
Indira Renganathan 18 February 2023

'Before the time is up Look at your stuff Mend your ways Else bubbles will burst.'...yes, how much a retrospection is essential is beautifully expressed...full score

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Rebecca Navarre 28 March 2021

Beautifully expressed with powerful reflections! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..

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Captain Cur 21 March 2021

A beautiful tapestry you weaved with that poetic needle. But keep it away from that hot air balloon, or we will all be grounded!

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Kostas Lagos 21 March 2021

Splendid poem. I will certainly read it more than once

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Varsha M 22 November 2020

Very true words. Nicely woven and written. Thank-you. Indeed we need to take care.

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