A small pin is enough
To burst any bubble
Life is so beautiful
Like a dream in dream
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Beautifully expressed with powerful reflections! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..
A beautiful tapestry you weaved with that poetic needle. But keep it away from that hot air balloon, or we will all be grounded!
Very true words. Nicely woven and written. Thank-you. Indeed we need to take care.
'Before the time is up Look at your stuff Mend your ways Else bubbles will burst.'...yes, how much a retrospection is essential is beautifully expressed...full score