Saturday, September 10, 2016

Bubbles.. Comments

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A tiny bubble bursts,
The value of life lost,

Childhood memories,
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AKSHAYA KUMAR DAS
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Subhas Chandra Chakra 10 September 2016

10 marks for your nicely written poem. Thanks. Subhas

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Akshaya Kumar Das 16 September 2016

Thank u so much Sir: 3 Subas Chandra Chakra: 3

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 10 September 2016

The curiosity remains a puzzle, Even in adulthood unable to crack, Pretending to have understood the myth, A tiny bubble burst, Life's value is lost, Beautiful lines. Good memories are like bubbles that burst and vanish any moment. Thanks for the sharing of this lovely poem.

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Anil Kumar Panda 10 September 2016

Yeah. Life vanishes like a bubble when we leave this world. a sort of philosophical drop. Like it.

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Gajanan Mishra 10 September 2016

value of life lost but how!

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