Monday, July 11, 2011

Bubbles Comments

Rating: 5.0

When I put my head underwater
I feel that I am somewhere else
so I yell and yell
and nobody can hear me
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Trinny Ruizi 11 July 2011

Wow! What a poem, full of sentiment. Good grammar and strong expressions. I gave it a 10. Please rate and comment my poem frosty afternoon. Best regards.

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