Monday, September 26, 2005

Bubble Of Perfection Comments

Rating: 5.0

The dream of just floating -
in a perfect bubble of glisteneing colours,
reflecting silver, blue, and purple.
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CHARMAINE SIMPSON
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Brian Dorn 15 July 2006

Charmaine, I like the bubble concept... unfortunately, in real life, the bubble often bursts. Great poem though! ! Brian

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CHARMAINE SIMPSON

CHARMAINE SIMPSON

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