Saturday, July 4, 2009

Bubble Bath Comments

Rating: 5.0

This poem is dedicated to Alejandro Dorantes Junior. Although the poem is confusing, I will forever cherish the memories of our childhood that we formed, even if we grow older.. This poem symbolises our journey through life and how things change. Remember I will always love you, my little boy!

Exposed, bare white skin,
Reflecting off the surface of the tub
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Jacqueline Dorantes
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 04 March 2010

Abstract poem…requires further reading…what I got ‘…Splashing water fall, Twinkling, bubbling giggles without care….’highly lithe part… 10 Ms. Nivedita UK

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Keith Hendrickson 07 July 2009

your flow is really good in this one. keep up the great work.

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Sarwar Chowdhury 06 July 2009

thoughts penned beautifully! .....10+

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