Sunday, February 24, 2008

Bubble Bath Comments

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I've run a bath but the water's too hot
and it burns my skin
But I lie in there regardless, hoping
it'll melt my pain within
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Caroline Guedes
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Emancipation Planz 25 September 2009

Caroline! I entered in as tis one of my favourite places.. except this is not what I was expecting at all... yes I felt every burst of pop against epidermic abrasions... great portrayal of the scolding of a mind, heart and a bath! and yes sometimes we can be just a BUB BLEeding out... if all else fails... try farting through them.. brings instant smiles... if that does work.. maybe tis time to throw the toaster in....

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Caroline Guedes

Caroline Guedes

Ottawa, Ontario Canada
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