Saturday, June 9, 2012

Bu(E) Tter Fly Comments

Rating: 5.0

Your innocent eyes lightly closed
Your tender limbs partly stilled
In swaddling linen's comfort wrapped
You sleep within your mother's girdling arms.
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Valsa George
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Akhtar Jawad 25 September 2017

I don't know the meaning of Tter Fly, I can only gues, it's a poem written by Valsa George on the birth of her first granddaughter. Whoever the Tter Fly may be, she is so beautiful and lovely that she inspried the poetess to write this attractive poem that made me eager to know wo is that fly. I believe she is a butterfly in the disguise of a granddaughter.

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Glen Kappy 25 August 2017

this is lovely, valsa. what comes to mind is being in a gallery of art works and seeing among the people an infant in its mother's arms. where the greatest art? -glen

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Simone Inez Harriman 09 March 2017

Such fortune this little one in your poem has. To be loved, protected and appreciated is surely the best ingredients to grow confident lovely people.10+++++

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Edward Kofi Louis 11 July 2016

Blissful is your rest. Nice work.

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Rajkamal P.j 18 November 2014

A great visualization in all subtle details. A words sojourn.Title is far excellent. Congrats

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 15 September 2014

Oh! what a imagery of a nice cute baby in a mother's arms.......Valsa......so delicately scripted....I loved it so much.....10/10

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Vipins Puthooran 23 June 2012

Magnificient! ! ! top markssss! ! ! !

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Valerie Dohren 17 June 2012

Beautiful poem, full of imagination.

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Elena Sandu 16 June 2012

Amazingly beautiful written poem, I wish it could wash all sadness away. Thank you for sharing this wonderful heart felt poem!

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 16 June 2012

i appreciate your visualization. shan

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