Saturday, February 2, 2019

Brush Strokes...Freeing! Comments

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Was it a brush stroke, I ask you?
Felt so light and freeing
...yet, each time I reached out
Strokes were brushed off...the canvas
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Gio Masserati
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Sandra Feldman 03 February 2019

Fascinating poem Made of rainbows, color spectrums And dreams, Slightly surrealistic, But still beautifully realistic enough Not to fall apart at the seams. Very sincere and well written. Excellently done, pulls the reader in, not letting go till the full idea conquers and is done. The color scheme represents feelings that affect the poet's mood differently but that prove emotional for the reader and complete the canvas of this poem, brilliantly.

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Gio Masserati 03 February 2019

Thank You, Sandra, for your comments and poetic touch of artistic flair. So vividly do I see your notations in my mind. What a gift it is to visualize a welcomed addition in your words. Gnite, Gio

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