Friday, November 11, 2005

Brush Of Lightning Comments

Rating: 4.8

Last night the lightning tried to touch
the peak of the highest hill that
commands the picture that paints the horizon
It looked like a brush that was
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Bobbie Ann Pimm 20 November 2005

Beautiful imagery. Well done.

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Uriah Hamilton 20 November 2005

What an amazing picture, you found a lovely way to frame a storm.

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Ernestine Northover 12 November 2005

A lovely essay on how lightning can provide us with such a vibrant picture, and you have expressed the story so well. Sincerely Ernestine

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Mary Nagy 11 November 2005

Loving lightening storms as I do.........this poem really appeals to me. Very beautiful. Sincerely, Mary

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***** ********* 11 November 2005

Very vivid Cokbod! rofl love the name...oh dear, this is a bigger madhouse than I am used to...oops! just thinking out loud. Wonderful picture you paint, as did the lightning try, but please tell me, would it have been a lesser picture if the lightning had struck? Smiling Tai 10 for artistic endeavour

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