Tuesday, September 4, 2012

Brunt Of The Storm Comments

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the old woman
sits on the floor,
talking to the vacuum cleaner,
and laughing with the broom.
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Eric Cockrell
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Lyn Paul 05 September 2012

Eric, this was so sad but beautifully expressed. And we know that there are many people all alone and in this situation. Thank You, very touching. I have save this for my special page.

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Captain Cur 04 September 2012

Lonliness excellently described in this poem. I felt like I was in that room with the old woman.

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