Sunday, August 6, 2006

Bruises Comments

Rating: 5.0

Bruises and breaks
A few tugs to the heart
Do you love mommy
When shes tears you apart
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Tatianna Rei Moonshadow
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Melvina Germain 20 October 2006

Hmmm, I wonder 'You're mommy's perfect boy or daddy's little girl'. You mention son earlier a few lines up. Could this child be suffering abuse due to a gender problem, possibly a cross gender or possibly be gay. I'm seeing that in this poem. If I'm incorrect, please do let me know. I think this is a very good poem, you bring the reader into the poem, and that's fantastic.--Melvina--

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Iva Wells 16 August 2006

good poem but sad to cause i know a few people this happens to: (

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Kristin C. 11 August 2006

Wonderful darling.

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