Bruised Rose Comments

This is a stunningly beautiful write. I wondered why I have a bees nest outside my door! lol literally Tai, beaming a smile at you

Beautiful imagery, bringing the rose to life with a strong sense of vulnerability - I like it. My poem, 'Every Rose has a Thorn' gives a slightly different, but equally sorrowful character to the Rose - looking at the un-intended ability of the Rose to cause harm.