Tuesday, September 12, 2006

Bruised Lips Comments

Rating: 5.0

Bruised lips;
Mascara smeared-
Panties lying
Over there.
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Jessy Liz
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Jerry Hughes 24 March 2007

...I wondered where you got to? Damn good write just the same

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Brian Dorn 15 September 2006

Wow, Jessy... amazing write! Vivid depictions and brilliant imagery... well done! ! Brian

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Melvina Germain 13 September 2006

Well, I'm glad you got away baby, good for you, very good poem, a (10) from me---Thanks for sharing--Melvina

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William Jackson 12 September 2006

Very sad poem. I do not understand men of the type in this poem. Why not have it all and savor and nurture relationship along with the conquest? Great write. It is also disturbing that many women seem to seek out disfunctional relationships of this type.

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