Bruised & Burnt Comments
I feel as though my skin is taut & stretched so tightly over bone
On a rack my body caught stretched until my form has grown
I feel as though my head is cracked & all I am is fading fast
Insanity has now attacked, erasing present, future, past.
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I love the way the physical imagery is used to show the inner spiritual torment. Quite nifty really!
Oh my, what a shame, this is so sad, it truly is. I can certainly understand the last line, which indicates without this darkness the partner of this individual would now experience light. I would rather think though that this unhappy person seek the light themselves. Excellent poem never-the-less--Mevina--
I would prefer that you not think like that, but, if you must ... given where you are coming from ... that is actually well said! B.V.A.
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7/27/2025 1:03:05 PM # 1.0.0
You definately have a talent like few in the world my friend, but I'm worried about your soul. It cannot just be that you imagine these things you are writing. I think you must be experiencing them to be able to express it so vividly. May you find peace... 'For what does it profit a man if he gains the whole world, and loses his own soul? ' Mark 8: 36