Thursday, June 17, 2010

Bruce Is Hurt Comments

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Bruce is hurt today,
He got stung by something bad.
My leg is hurting, he seems to say,
Can't put it down, I feel so sad.
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Juan Olivarez
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Claudia Krizay 02 October 2011

I like the happy ending of this poem. A very sweet and sensitive write- a 10.

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