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Lovely and unique imagery. You dive well below the surface to find such wonder. Best Steve

Immersed in the sea of love, gentle and passionate waves bathed in the calm, yet sometimes turbulent waters nerve endings tingling with excitement, then the pure totally relaxed sensation of togetherness Phew! its hot in here! would someone puleeees open that door!

This style flows well Fay, I adored each stanza that you have expertly penned here.....excellent piece my friend.....I'd like to see you write more in this form 10++

Browsing through..... to better bear the love's sweet pain. WOW! ! ! Awesome poem..different in style yet so heartfelt...10+++